Junior Crit

I met with Ramzy Marsi and Nick Karn, Tuesday October 12th. The feedback from the critique was taken into consideration in the final process round.

Major points from that critique:

Placement of the type works better at the bottom rather than the middle. (march)

Suggestions for further exploration of copy.(noose)

Arrangement of objects on the page and their visual clarity(technical craft).(noose)